In C# the program is supposed to count how many valid and invalid values were entered by comparing them to the array and then give a total of the correct and incorrect inputs, but when I enter numbers that are outside of the bounds of the if statement the code from the if statement still runs. I've gone back and reviewed videos and the textbook and I cannot see where my if else statement is lacking.
int[] values = { 0, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, };
int count = 0;
Console.WriteLine("Enter a value between 0 and 10");
foreach (int v in values)
{
Console.ReadLine();
if (values[v] >= 0 || values[v] <= 10)
{
Console.WriteLine("Enter a value");
count++;
}
else
{
Console.WriteLine("Invalid Entry");
count++;
}
}
Console.WriteLine("You entered {0} correct values", count);
Console.WriteLine("You entered {0} incorrect values", count);
Console.ReadKey();
}
}
(values[v] >= 0 || values[v] <= 10) will always return true, all numbers are either less than 10 or greater than zero. Presumably you want an and (&&) operator to grab values between 0 and 10 inclusive
Also, foreach iterates through the values of an array, not the index, so you don't need to reference values[v], you can just reference v directly (although in your case values[v]==v). Calling values[v] in a foreach runs a huge risk of indexOutOfBounds exceptions. If you want to iterate through the index a straight for loop is more appropriate:
for(int i = 0; i< values.Length; i++)
var myVal = values[i];
Final Edit, you aren't actually checking the user's input
var input = Console.ReadLine();
//you never bothered capturing the user's input with a variable
decimal myNum;
if (decimal.TryParse(input, out myNum)) //did the user give a number?
{
//use myNum instead of values[v]
}
else
{
//process bad input
}
There's a bunch of stuff you can do to make things cleaner, (like removing your array altogether and using for(int i = 0; i< 10; i++) instead, for example), but good code doesn't happen on day 1 (my first few projects make me wanna throw up now), you got this friend.
You have a foreach loop, you do not need to use
if (values[v] >= 0 || values[v] <= 10)
instead, use
if(v >= 0 || v <= 10)
plus your if statement will always return true because the value you have in your array of int is greater than or equals to 0 or less than or equals to 10.
Try to change the array from
int[] values = { 0, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, };
to
int[] values = { -5, 1, 2, 3, 11, 5, 6, 13, 8, 9, 15, };
and you should have 4 incorrect count, provided you separate the correct count and incorrect count instead of adding them together using the count.
Separate them into validCount and invalidCount
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I'm sure I'm making an incredibly silly mistake but I've been at this for hours and I just want my code to sort prettily... Something is going wrong with implementation when odd numbers come into the equation.
Below is my MergeSplit method:
static List<Motor> MergeSplit(List<int> ListX)
{
int n = ListX.Count;
if (n <= 1)
return ListX;
List<int> left = new List<int>();
List<int> right = new List<int>();
for (int i = 0; i < n; i++)
{
if (i < (n / 2))
left.Add(ListX[i]);
else
right.Add(ListX[i]);
}
left = MergeSplit(left);
right = MergeSplit(right);
return Merge(left, right);
}
And here is the Merge method:
static List<int> Merge(List<int> ListX, List<int> ListY)
{
List<int> result = new List<int>();
int i = 0;
while (ListX.Count > i && ListY.Count > i)
{
if (ListX[i] > ListY[i])
{
result.Add(ListY[i]);
result.Add(ListX[i]);
}
else
{
result.Add(ListX[i]);
result.Add(ListY[i]);
}
i++;
}
//If odd, add the rest to the result
if (ListX.Count > ListY.Count)
result.Add(ListX[ListX.Count - 1]);
else if (ListY.Count > ListX.Count)
result.Add(ListY[ListY.Count - 1]);
return result;
}
Thanks for your help!
Update
The algorithm just doesnt sort correctly with certain inputs
The problem is your Merge routine
You are comparing the left and right and adding them to the list respectively, where you should be comparing the heads, and adding the lowest to the result, and removing that head respectively for the next comparison
This is the pseudo code from wiki https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Merge_sort
while left is not empty and right is not empty do
if first(left) ≤ first(right) then
append first(left) to result
left := rest(left)
else
append first(right) to result
right := rest(right)
You can see why thats important here
As you can see its actually comparing the first left and first right, then adding them to the result and removing that item from the list. which is vastly different from what you are doing. you either need 2 index variables, or remove the items from the list
while (listX.Count > 0 && listY.Count > 0)
if (listX[0] > listY[0])
{
result.Add(listY[0]);
listY.RemoveAt(0);
}
else
{
result.Add(listX[0]);
listX.RemoveAt(0);
}
if (listX.Count > 0)
result.AddRange(listX);
else if (listY.Count > 0)
result.AddRange(listY);
Just for fun, i found this was easier to play with queues, they seem to like this sort of thing
private static Queue<int> Merge(Queue<int> left, Queue<int> right)
{
var result = new Queue<int>();
while (left.Count > 0 && right.Count > 0)
result.Enqueue(left.Peek() > right.Peek() ? right.Dequeue() : left.Dequeue());
foreach (var item in left)
result.Enqueue(item);
foreach (var item in right)
result.Enqueue(item);
return result;
}
private static Queue<int> MergeSplit(Queue<int> list)
{
var n = list.Count;
if (n <= 1)
return list;
var left = new Queue<int>();
var right = new Queue<int>();
for (var i = 0; i < n; i++)
if (i < n / 2)
left.Enqueue(list.Dequeue());
else
right.Enqueue(list.Dequeue());
left = MergeSplit(left);
right = MergeSplit(right);
return Merge(left, right);
}
Usage
var list = new List<int> { 8, 7, 6, 4, 43, 23, 435, 76, 7, 7877, 5, 421, 2 };
var results = MergeSplit(new Queue<int>(list));
Console.WriteLine(string.Join(", ", results));
Output
2, 4, 5, 6, 7, 7, 8, 23, 43, 76, 421, 435, 7877
Full Demo Here
Say I have an an array of numbers:
int[] that = new [] {1, 2, 3, 2, 4, 8, 9, 7};
I'm trying to display them so that the numbers that are increasing have their own line.
For example the result would be:
1 2 3
2 4 8 9
7
I'm able to do the first row using,
for (int i = 1; i < that.Length; i++)
{
if (that[i-1] < that[i])
{
Console.Write(that[i-1] + " ");
}
}
The thing is this works for the first row because 1-3 are increasing but stops after that.
I'm not exactly sure how to continue so that 2 4 8 9, then 7 are written.
I have a feeling this is homework so I'm going to leave the actual coding to you. But here's how to do it in plain language:
Have a variable where we store the previous value. Let's call it oldValue, and start it with zero (if you're only using positive numbers in your array).
Go through the array one item at a time.
Check to see if that number is larger than oldValue.
If FALSE, print the new line character. "\n" in C#.
Print that number and make oldValue equal that number.
Unless your numbers are finished get the next number and go to step 3.
You never create a new line.
int[] arr = new[] {1, 2, 3, 2, 4, 8, 9, 7};
for(var i = 0; i < arr.Length; i++){
if(i == 0 || ((i < arr.Length - 1) && arr[i] < arr[i + 1])){
Console.Write(arr[i]);
} else {
Console.Write("{0}\n", arr[i]);
}
}
Output:
123
2489
7
Couple of remarks:
Avoid the usage of this as a variable name. It's a reserved
keyword.
Use \n as a newline character.
There are a number of ways you can do this, either by appending a string with characters until a lesser one is reached and then using the Console.WriteLine() command to write the entire string at once, or (the easier way given your code) which is to simply test for the new value being lesser than the previous and inserting a newline character into your text.
// Start at zero
for (int i = 0; i < this.Length; i++)
{
// If this is not the first element in the array
// and the new element is smaller than the previous
if (i > 0 && this[i] < this[i-1])
{
// Then insert a new line into the output
Console.Write(Environment.NewLine);
}
Console.Write(this[i] + " ");
}
int[] numbers = new int[] { 1, 2, 3, 2, 4, 8, 9, 7 };
String orderedNumbers = String.Empty;
for (int i = 0; i < numbers.Length; i++)
{
if (i == 0 || numbers[i] > numbers[i - 1])
{
orderedNumbers += numbers[i].ToString();
}
else
{
orderedNumbers += System.Environment.NewLine + numbers[i].ToString();
}
}
MessageBox.Show(orderedNumbers);
construct the shortest possible sequence of integers ending with A,
using the following rules:
the first element of the sequence is 1, each of the successive
elements is the sum of any two preceding elements (adding a single
element to itself is also permissible), each element is larger than
all the preceding elements; that is, the sequence is increasing.
For example, for A = 42, a possible solutions is [1, 2, 3, 6, 12, 24,
30, 42]. Another possible solution is [1, 2, 4, 5, 8, 16, 21, 42].
I have written the following but it fails on input of 456, by returning[1,2,4,8,16,32,64,128,200,256,456] , there are no numbers in the sequence that can be added together to get 200.
how can I fix the below code? what am I doing wrong?
public static int[] hit(int n)
{
List<int> nums = new List<int>();
int x = 1;
while (x < n)
{
nums.Add(x);
x = x * 2;
if (x > n)
{
nums.Add(n - (x / 2));
nums.Add(n);
}
}
nums.Sort();
int[] arr = nums.ToArray();
return arr;
}
I know there is gonna be a mathematical proof behind this, but my guess would be along the lines of dividing the number by 2, if it divides equally, repeat the process. If the there is a remainder, it would be 1. So you would have the integer quotient and the quotient plus one. Since one is guaranteed to be in the set, the larger of the 2 numbers is already taken care of. So just repeat the process for the smaller. This problem certainly implies a recursive solution that should be relatively trivial, so I will leave that up to the poster to implement.
I think I got it:
public Set<Integer> shortList(int n){
Set<Integer> result = new HashSet<Integer>();
Stack<Integer> stack = new Stack<Integer>();
result.add(n);
int num=n, den=0;
while(num>1){
while(num > den){
num--; den++;
if(num%den==0)
stack.push(num);
}//num>den
if(!stack.isEmpty()){
num = stack.pop();
result.add(num);
stack.clear();
}else{
result.add(num);
result.add(den);
}
den=0;
}
return result;
}//
Results (unsorted)
for 42: [1, 2, 3, 21, 6, 7, 42, 14]
for 15: [1, 2, 4, 5, 10, 15]
for 310: [1, 2, 155, 4, 5, 310, 10, 124, 62, 31, 15, 30]
Here is my solution in C++ (may be trivially changed to C#):
void printSequenceTo(unsigned n)
{
if (n == 1) { printf("1"); return; }
if (n & 1) {
int factor = 3;
do {
if (n % factor == 0) {
printSequenceTo(n / factor * (factor-1));
factor = 0;
break;
}
factor += 2;
} while (factor * factor <= n);
if (factor) printSequenceTo(n-1);
}
else
printSequenceTo(n/2);
printf(",%u", n);
}
Demonstration: http://ideone.com/8lXxc
Naturally it could be sped up using a sieve for factorization.
Note, this is significant improvement over the accepted answer, but it still is not optimal.
Here is my attempt. It may be optimised, but it shows my idea:
private static IEnumerable<int> OptimalSequence(int lastElement)
{
var result = new List<int>();
int currentElement = 1;
do
{
result.Add(currentElement);
currentElement = currentElement * 2;
} while (currentElement <= lastElement);
var realLastElement = result.Last();
if (lastElement != realLastElement)
{
result.Add(lastElement);
FixCollection(result, lastElement - realLastElement);
}
return result;
}
private static void FixCollection(List<int> result, int difference)
{
for (int i = 0; i < result.Count; i++)
{
if (result[i] == difference) break;
if (result[i] > difference)
{
result.Insert(i, difference);
FixCollection(result, difference - result[i-1]);
break;
}
}
}
Edit
I can't prove it formally but my answer and Chris Gessler's answer give sequences of the same size (at least I checked for numbers between 1 and 10000) because both algorithms compensate odd numbers.
Some examples:
Number 1535
1,2,3,4,7,8,15,16,31,32,63,64,127,128,255,256,511,512,1024,1535
Number 2047
1,2,3,4,7,8,15,16,31,32,63,64,127,128,255,256,511,512,1023,1024,2047
Number 3071
1,2,3,4,7,8,15,16,31,32,63,64,127,128,255,256,511,512,1023,1024,2048,3071
Number 4095
1,2,3,4,7,8,15,16,31,32,63,64,127,128,255,256,511,512,1023,1024,2047,2048,4095
Number 6143
1,2,3,4,7,8,15,16,31,32,63,64,127,128,255,256,511,512,1023,1024,2047,2048,4096,6143
Number 8191
1,2,3,4,7,8,15,16,31,32,63,64,127,128,255,256,511,512,1023,1024,2047,2048,4095,4096,8191
==============
Number 1535
1,2,4,5,10,11,22,23,46,47,94,95,190,191,382,383,766,767,1534,1535
Number 2047
1,2,3,6,7,14,15,30,31,62,63,126,127,254,255,510,511,1022,1023,2046,2047
Number 3071
1,2,4,5,10,11,22,23,46,47,94,95,190,191,382,383,766,767,1534,1535,3070,3071
Number 4095
1,2,3,6,7,14,15,30,31,62,63,126,127,254,255,510,511,1022,1023,2046,2047,4094,4095
Number 6143
1,2,4,5,10,11,22,23,46,47,94,95,190,191,382,383,766,767,1534,1535,3070,3071,6142,6143
Number 8191
1,2,3,6,7,14,15,30,31,62,63,126,127,254,255,510,511,1022,1023,2046,2047,4094,4095,8190,8191
public static int[] hit(int n)
{
List<int> nums = new List<int>();
nums.Add(n);
int x = 0;
int Right = 0;
int Left = 0;
do
{
//even num
if (n % 2 == 0)
{
x = n / 2;
//result of division is also even 20/2 = 10
if (x % 2 == 0 || n>10 )
{
nums.Add(x);
n = x;
}
else
{
nums.Add(x + 1);
nums.Add(x - 1);
n = x - 1;
}
}
//numbers that can only be divided by 3
else if (n % 3 == 0)
{
x = n / 3;//46/3 =155
Right = x * 2;//155*2 = 310
Left = x;//155
nums.Add(Right);
nums.Add(Left);
n = x;
}
//numbers that can only be divided by 5
else
{
x = n / 2;
Right = x + 1;
Left = x;
nums.Add(Right);
nums.Add(Left);
n = Left;
}
} while (n > 2);
nums.Add(1);
nums.Reverse();
int[] arr = nums.ToArray();
return arr;
}